30 October 2011

Rejection #31: Beneath Ceaseless Skies

Thanks very much for sending this story to _Beneath Ceaseless Skies_. Unfortunately, it's not quite right for us.  I liked the set-up of Elisabet's situation and the feel that she was being unfairly adjudicated, but when the story jumped to the township and Elisabet as Ice Queen, with the long jumps in time, I lost my earlier feel for her goals and stakes and personality as a character.

I appreciate your interest in our magazine.  Please feel free to submit again.

Regards,

Scott H. Andrews
Publisher and Editor-in-Chief
_Beneath Ceaseless Skies_
http://beneath-ceaseless-skies.com

Notes: HEY! A PERSONALIZED REJECTION! That's almost like getting accepted.

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